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Feb 25, 2010

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I'm sorry, I couldn't get past the clunky lead:

If the proposed new hotel in downtown Greensboro ever does actually get built – and right now that looks like a very big if – the way things are going, by the time it gets built, the proposed luxury hotel could turn out to be a Red Roof Inn.

One thought per sentence please.

Andrew Brod

If we're going to start complaining about the writing and editing in the Rhino, we'll be here all day.

Ian McDowell

Crikey, that's a dreadfully written lede! Even if Yost was drunk when he composed it, doesn't the Rhino have a copy editor?

(I know, I know; the fact that every article is about 33% too long and full of redunduncies suggests otherwise, but still, this is even more egregious than usual!)

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